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Review - The Princess and the Pea by A.G. Marshall


I picked this book up during the National Fairy Tale Day festivities last week, and I’m so glad I did!  I’ll definitely be reading more books by Marshall.

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This full-length novel retells “The Princess and the Pea” with an epic twist.  Waking up from an enchanted trance in which she battled invading goblin forces and sealed them away from the world of men, Lina finds that a hundred years have passed.  She arrives at the Aeonian capital just in time to be accidentally included in a Princess Test.

This generation’s Princess Test is very important to the kings of Aeonia.  The royal family came to the throne under suspicious circumstances about eighty years ago, and now the King of Gaveson is threatening to annex the country unless they marry into an old royal family from one of the other nations.  Now twenty princesses and noble ladies—all under strict orders not to reveal who they are or which countries they came from—have arrived to meet Crown Prince Alaric and undergo the Tests.

Being included in the Tests gives Lina access to the Council of Kings.  She needs to speak to them, as her magic has revealed that there is still danger of a goblin invasion.  Unfortunately, no one believes in goblins any more…

High Points
Lina is competent, smart, and determined, and she quickly makes friends with the other princesses.  I loved her!

When I read the blurb for this story, I noted the “prince must marry for the good of the kingdom” plot trope and groaned internally.  It wasn’t a surprise—this is “The Princess and the Pea,” after all—but I’ve gotten very tired of it.  The princes usually moan and groan about their situation, but instantly forget their resistance when they first see the eyes/smile of that special someone…  But Marshall’s story was not like that AT ALL.  Instead, we have Prince Alaric, who is determined to do the responsible thing and marry for the good of the kingdom despite the protests of his father, brother, and stepmother, who all think he should marry someone that he actually likes.  He’s actually way TOO responsible, which is something I’m have a lot more sympathy for than the usual princely (or princessly) whining.  He’s great!

There are also half a dozen secondary characters who add a lot to the story.  Alaric’s brother Stefan and stepmother Marta, the valet Bastien, Carina and the other princesses in the Princess Test.  I’m so glad that this book is part of a series—I just know we’ll get to see more of these characters.

Critiques
Sometimes I felt like the fairy-tale tropes and the epic fantasy tropes were a little too obvious.  But for the most part Marshall does a good job of weaving them together into a single plot in a coherent setting.

Bottom Line
Well worth reading!  I’m looking forward to the rest of the series.

One quick note in my role as a copy editor: I didn’t find a single typo or grammatical error while reading.  (This has never previously been my experience with a self-published book.)  As someone who compulsively checks grammar and has been known to pencil in corrections for the grammar/spelling mistakes in library books (…sacrilege, I know…), this makes me very happy.

You can find the book here.

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